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Post by Koji Sakamoto on Feb 12, 2010 12:37:47 GMT -5
Shy, but Harmful. - - -KOJI storm SAKAMOTO "let us be the ones who block out the sun, light projects through myself"
&. ALIAS: Ko, Storm.
&. AGE: Seventeen.
&. GENDER: Male.
&. SEXUALITY: Bisexual.
&. STATUS: Single.
☆ Helpful - Can be some what helpful with things, but it's something quite rare to see. ☆ Honest - Will tell you the truth, even if it can hurt sometimes. ☆ Mature - Doesn't act his age, he's like an adult in a child's body. ☆ Kind - Tries to be kind to others, even if he thinks he's very bad at it. ☆ Strong - Not strong as in lifting something, but he has a large ego, that he wouldn't let anything break.
★ Stuck-up - He thinks he knows it all, like he is always right. ★ Stubborn - Hard to break, likes things his way. ★ Shy - Hides away from others too easy. ★ Quiet - Will not speak until he is spoken to. ★ Rude - Can say some nasty but truthful things without really thinking them through.
✓ Reading - Sets his mind at ease, enjoys his thoughts to travel to different places. ✓ Piano - Feels this is the only way he can show his real feelings for things and his life. ✓ Sweets - Pies and cakes are his weakness. ✓ Rain - It delights him when it falls, he also enjoys the way it touches his skin. ✓ Night Sky's - The stars seems to loss him when he looks up.
✕ Touching - He really hates to be touched by people, mostly ones he doesn't know. ✕ Raspberries - They smell weird and when he eats them they seem to make him break out in hives. ✕ Long Talks - They bore him so. ✕ Forgetting Something - Mostly things they he wanted to remember. ✕ Cold Weather - He can't stand the Winter, it makes him grumpy.
♡ Does Like Hugs - Even thought he hates to be touched. ♡ Right Eye - He's not blind, just like feeling like he is different. ♡ Boys - He likes the male sex more then female, but wishes others not to know.
» Eye Patch - Either black or white, he has no real reason why he choses to wear it, only that it makes him stand out. » Small Pocket Blade - He has never really used it, but feels he needs to carry it with him at all times.
- Mystic-eyes: Red, Purple and Orange.
- Traits Ranking:
Agility and Strength is quite strong as for Endurance and Perception are very weak.
- Origin: Luck; it gives him the will to not give up on things.
Abilities: Mind control; Koji's shy nature has contributed to the Demon Blood's ability to easily conceal his power, allowing him to unleash its fury on unaware foes. Through his clever persuasions, he can easily manipulate your thinking. Happiness will turn to despair before fear settles in and you begin to wonder if you will ever return to normal. Seemingly cute and harmless, it is this disguise that allows him to over take your mind. While most see a harmless child his power could be the death of you.
The only thing that can weaken him is touching. The one reason he hates to be touched is it makes his power seem to fade. Some may not see this a problem, but it can break down the strong will and make his mind scream in pain.
Combat Style: Koji's eyes. When they change colors, one look and everything around you seems to change. It feels like all happiness is being taken away. Once he has your eyes locked on his, everything you once felt before starts to leave your body. The power is like a clap of thunder, it happens so fast you feel it move into your thoughts. Choosing not to touch you, only just to stair into your mind. While you are under his control, Koji speaks to you as if nothing is wrong, all the while stealing your happiness. No matter how false this may be, however; something within you wishes it were. The slow rate of the power will be its weakness yet its strength, since most people will be looking into them anyway. The effects will slowly start to effect them, but it's power can be stopped by looking away from him.
Only this seems to not affect the ones that are stronger then him. Koji's power also has it's flaws on ones that are powerful or have more strength then him. Ones that are much weaker in with their own power always seem to be the ones that fall for looking into his eyes and slipping away from their own mines.
[b]d. gray-man[/b], [i]lavi[/i] I, PANDA, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 12, 2010 13:07:25 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. I'm sorry darling, due to a little malfunction to the face claim, we didn't place that ciel phantomhive was already taken as a face claim.
o2. Traits Ranking; if you notice on the other demon blood applications - they put a few short words to describe their strong points. For example;
Traits Ranking: Agility. Endurance. Perception. Strength.
Abilities and Combat style is where you would add all that information; don't forget to bring them all out with detail, also. <3
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Post by Koji Sakamoto on Feb 12, 2010 13:54:21 GMT -5
>.< Well...now I am in a bad spot. Thanks for your time...but I guess I may just change my mind on joining. Even thought this site looks amazing...I have no other ideas of who to uses as a face claim...as I pretty much did a lot of thinking for this one and it felt it was the only one that worked for my character. Ive been in so much bad luck for the past couple of days...my main RPG board I was on died...I joined this one board only to find I wasn't too welcome and no one really was up for RP. Now I'm very lost on what to do for a character on this amazing board I found. Sorry...really shouldn't be throwing my problems out...but I'm a very upset with how the RPG world is treating me. Thanks again...
-panda.
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Post by Koji Sakamoto on Feb 12, 2010 15:02:21 GMT -5
Okay. With the help of everyone in the Cbox. Face claim; fixed. (Thanks again!! ^-^) Everything else. Fixed? I hope!
-panda
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 18, 2010 13:20:11 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. The Abilities and Combat style are a little branching into the god modding area because you are controlling them and what they do. Perhaps instead of touching them to make your prey feel that way, you would rather use your way of words in the abilities section; like to make the way you speak so conniving and persuasive that you convince them to make them feel bad or awful about themselves.
But you also have to remember; what about those kinds of people who are very independent and strong willed characters? Think of something more effective so you can attack not only the lesser type of members but also ones that are noble vampires or even eternals. <3
o2. Combat style is rather how your character will stand and fight; will he just lie there on the ground, use physical strength, is he the evasive type and confronts battle at very far distances or will he be up close and personal? Description and weakness.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 21, 2010 13:38:16 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. "While this is all happening, he speak to you as if nothing is wrong, that happiness has not left from your body; something inside of you want to you believe this."
This sentence structure is a tad jumbled and might need a little modifications; something that will give the reader a clear picture and not scratching their heads in confusion.~ <3
o2. "he makes his move and the job is history."
What does he exactly do when he "makes his move"? and what do you mean by, "the job is history"? Also there needs to be faults with his manner of combat style.
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Post by Koji Sakamoto on Feb 22, 2010 23:32:32 GMT -5
Fix! (again.) Sorry it took me so long to fix these and get is right. (hope it is better!) I had some help on this, why it took me a little longer.
Thanks, panda
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 26, 2010 17:45:02 GMT -5
[accept]
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