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Post by Gungnir Clave on Feb 25, 2010 17:23:17 GMT -5
HAHAHA I'LL KILL YOU ALL - - - Gungnir Ian Clave "Where man ends...evil begins!"
&. ALIAS: Gunn, Tic-Toc Croc, Mister Crocodile
&. AGE: Three Hundred
&. GENDER: Male
&. SEXUALITY: Heterosexual
&. STATUS: Single
☆ Comidec ☆ Calm ☆ Collected ☆ Brave ☆ Strong willed
★ Slightly crazy ★ Cocky ★ Easy to aggrivate ★ Usually in a violent mind frame ★ Uncaring to most
✓ Fighting ✓ Killing ✓ Fresh meat / Warm blood ✓ Reptiles ✓ Water ✓ Strong prey / A good fight
✕ The Fae ✕ Being injured ✕ Gold ✕ Peanuts ✕ Pigs ✕ The cold
♡ His entire immediately family was at different times all became Cursed Shifters. All by the same trio of annoying little magic users, who as of yet are still unknown to Gunn. ♡ Gunn's only true fear is dieing, though despite this he still enters dangerous battles/fights. ♡ Upon his first transformation Gunn almost massacred his entire family during a family gathering, fleeing after fighting his father, who transformed in defense, never too see any of them again.
» x1 Silver ring - Family ring » x1 Sword - The only weapon he uses when not transformed, crafted for him just before he was cursed.
- Species: albino saltwater crocodile
- Cursed Form: Full-beast.
- Traits Ranking: Strength, endurance, agility, magic.
Trigger: Laughing. His trigger is simple as that, he figures the magic user that cursed him had a sense of humor, thus that's why his laughter triggers his transformation. Despite knowing what his trigger is he never attempts to fight it off, but rather embraces it and loves the fact that he can laugh on command.
Abilities: His superhuman strength is probably his most noticeable ability, with his endurance and durability coming in a close second. Though his dominant and special ability would be his ability to, in a simple word "confuse" his enemies. He does this by laughing, releasing a mood altering toxin of sorts, which is not lethal, but can make a battle ready or raging lunatic become calm in moments.
Cursed Form: In his Cursed Form Gunn stands at a height of 7'5'' and weighs in at about 700lbs. Though despite this he is still quite fast and agile. His body is covered with the armor scales that looks exactly like a crocodiles, but only larger and stronger. His main weapons for combat would be the claws on his hands that are about four inches long and are black in color, while his other main weapon being his powerful tail which can kill most things in a single blow, his tail being the strongest part of his body. His other weapons would be should he draw his sword or use his feet and his toe claws which are about three inches in length.
[b]bleach[/b], [i]hollow ichigo[/i] I, BASTIAN, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Mar 4, 2010 16:15:33 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. On the top where it states, hahah I'll kill you all, that space is meant for a title rather than just what your character would say. Please change it to a title relating to your character.
o2. How can one be calm and easily aggravated at the same time? Also, I think you meant to spell the word comedic.
o3. The abilities are somewhat hard to follow; "Though his dominant and special ability would be his ability to in a simple word, confuse his enemies." Sea water crocodiles aren't exactly creatures to confuse another rather than just have strength and durability.
o4. Note weaknesses in his beast form, crocodiles aren't invincible now.~
o5. Way too strong and big for a sea water crocodile. They aren't very fast at all and the tail would deal heavy damage yes but not a one hit kill wonder. Plus the whole ordeal with drawing his sword in his cursed form? Very unlikely.
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