Nyan Ryu

[Nyan Ryu!]

Ghost.


- - - Nyan Ryu
"If it bleeds, it dies. If it doesn't bleed... Make it bleed."

&. ALIAS: Ghost.

&. AGE: She appears around 16-17.

&. GENDER: Female.

&. SEXUALITY: Bisexual.

&. STATUS: Single.




☆ Feels as though abandoned yet never alone.
☆ Can find a positive within a negative.
☆ Never backs down.
☆ Quite a affectionate person.
☆ Prioritizes friendship above all.




★ When en-raged, quite difficult to calm down.
★ When angered finds herself unable to stop at times.
★ Finds she never backs down no matter what.
★ Can over exagerate about simple things.
★ Ryu can often think only of herself in wrong situations.




✓ Friendship.
✓ To kil.
✓ Loves Pineapples.
✓ Likes small reptilians as pets.
✓ Loves to entertain.
✓ Loves blood.




✕ Mice.
✕ Dark places.
✕ Small confined areas.
✕ Being singled out.
✕ Being alone.
✕ Discussion of her horns.



♡ In fear of her life, or angered to a point. She has an unknown fact of another soul residing aswell inside of her body. Known as Ryu she is an evil, sadistic, alone and blood thirsty murderer apart from Nyan's more Affectionate and calming nature.
♡ Has a weird overly-strong want for a family, where as Ryu would want nothing more then to witness or be apart of the greatest bloody carnage the worlds ever seen.



» Black Hook sword.
» Wrench.

• Power Trigger: When she is angered or in fear she is able to activate her magical abilities. Though in her other state of mind, Ryu. She is able to pull the power from just thought alone when ever it pleases her.
  
  
• Magical Affinity: Average.
  

Abilities: Nyan Ryu is able to materialise four telepathically co-ordinated consistant arms she calls Ghost arms. They appear to come from her back, they are transparent by nature and have the ability to stretch to a five meter radius. Able to lift and wisthand much strength against her physically, they also vibrate at such a frequency that they are able to infact slice through nearly any solid object. Though transparent they are also able to become insubstantial and pass through objects.

To summon forth these Ghost arms, certain amount of energy involved is used, to make them able to phase through any object it does acquire the usage of addiontal energy before they'r able to phase through and keep them insubstantial. The Energy given off the arms when they are moving gives off excreations that allow some visual contact with the arms to the naked eye.


Primary Usage: She is rather concerned with fighting when her normal state of mind is in play, Nyan is a rather reluctant and careful fighter, though she loves to see blood shed. She isn't one who could take a life. Nyan's basic fighting style would be in the defensive attack, using atleast two at the same time as the other two to block, defend while the other two arms are attack, She barely uses the Hook sword and wonders why she ever needs it. Ryu, when in control she is rather loose and wild. She is unread-able and unpredictable with her fighting style. She can be calm at one point and at some stage un-believably insane, She fights usually four arms at once with little concern with defense, her fighting style is to torture before killing someone. Usually using her abilities to gain a closer upfront advantage so she is able to use her Hook sword to decimate an opponent or victim.



[b]Elfen Lied[/b], [i]Lucy/Nyu/Kaeda[/i]
I, Kunei, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.

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R E V I S E;

It's nice to see some Artificial Magi popping up~variety is good for the soul! But a few quick changes:

1. "feels abandoned yet never alone" To be honest, I can't really tell what you're trying to express with this statement. Also a feeling of abandonment seems like it would fit more under "personal Dark" then "personal Light". And "quite a affectionate person". Just change that a to an.

2. " When en-raged, quite difficult to calm down. When angered finds herself unable to stop at times. Finds she never backs down no matter what." You have these listed as three different traits, but they all seem to be describing the same emotion. Take out two of them, and try to find other negative traits that might fit in with her. If she over-exaggerates and can't back down, is she also bossy? Does her love of killing make her proud or stubborn? Stuff like that~

3. Just another eensy thing to fix: "to kil" should be "to kill".

4. You need at least three secrets. Try breaking the second one into two parts? One secret could be Nyan's desire for a family, while the third would be Ryu's desire for the greatest carnage.

5. Weakness! Artificial Magi are just that--artificial. These Ghost Arms are going to play havoc with her body and wear her down the longer she uses them. Do the arms move even if her concentration is broken or she's distracted, or will they take independent action? Also, becoming insubstantial or cutting through any object; pick just one. Having both abilities is a little overpowered. And you've got a few spelling errors as well in this section as well; nothing big.

5b. Anger or fear~like with insubstantial or cut through all solids, pick one or the other. And Ryu is going to have to be angry/afraid to activate her ability as well, she can't just have it whenever. Though it seems like Ryu is always angry, so maybe that won't be a problem. D:

6. Nyan/Ryu. Your character seems to have dissociative identity disorder, where Nyan and Ryu are each separate personalities with different reactions to the environment? If so, when one takes over, the other isn't going to remember what happened when they weren't in control--if Ryu gets in a fight and suddenly Nyan takes over, Nyan is going to be wondering what's going on, yes? How will that effect day-to-day life, much less combat? And DID usually comes from a traumatic background event (sexual abuse, extreme stress conditions, etc). Just throw in three or four sentences about how Nyan/Ryu split into two facets.

I hope I've been helpful! Make these changes and hopefully you'll get accepted soon.