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Post by Mashiro Koyuki on Feb 7, 2010 17:59:22 GMT -5
Water PRINCESS - - - Mashimizutaki Usui "We stand in awe before that which cannot be seen, and we respect with every fiber that which cannot be explained"
&. ALIAS: The Water Princess
&. AGE: Fifteen
&. GENDER: Female
&. SEXUALITY: Heterosexual
&. STATUS: Single
☆ Serene ☆ Empathic ☆ Regal ☆ Passionate ☆ Optimistic ☆ Motherly
★ Under-confident ★ Self-Centered ★ Cold ★ Unapproachable ★ Can't Draw ★ Emotional ★ Prone to be a Nag.
✓ Snow ✓ Winter ✓ Water ✓ Moonlight ✓ Ice ✓ Sweets ✓ Lollipops ✓ Ice Sculptures
✕ Seeing Snow Melt ✕ Summer ✕ Over-Confident People ✕ Arrogance and Ignorance ✕ Hot-Blooded People
♡ Does the Cat's Cradle ♡ Calligraphy ♡ Has a pet cat.
» Nodokagetsu Niwakaame - Tranquil Moon Pure Rain This weapon was a gift given to her mother from a generational tradition from her homeland. It's a normal colored sword which but the hilt are in a navy blue hue. When used Mashimizu can use this sword as a focus for her water related magic. » Luck Charm » Water Gourd » Necklace from her Grandmother » Hybrobender Scrolls x 3
- Disciplines: Hydromancy
- Magical Knowledge: average (2)
- Magical Energy: average (2)
- Magical Talents: average (2)
- Miscellaneous Talents: average (2)
Combination: Mashimizu uses her knowledge for her hydromancy with her natural coldness around her body to create snow and ice. It's her specialty. Being around a constant snowy land, her body is used to cold climates and withstand cold. With her skill of the sword and the magic, Mashimizu can create techniques to incorporate the best of both worlds. Her mother Katara named their style "hydrobending" (Hydro meaning Water and Bending for having the ability to manipulate water)
Normal Techs:
- Shabon Spray
Mashimizu will hold water in between her hands using her ability to "bend" water and will will disperse it to create a mist with bubble to distract and confuse the enemy
- Shabon Spray Freezing
A variation of the Shabon Spray but adding more of her hydromancy's power of freezing the bubbles will freeze on contact.
- Streaming the Water
Named by her mother Katara, it is a move that draws water from a source that hydrobenders move around their bodies.This move is thought to be used for basic training so that beginning benders can get a "feel" for water, but it is in all actuality a very useful move performed by hydrobenders of every skill level.
- Water Whips
The most frequently seen move involves creating a lashing tendril of water to swipe at an opponent. The shape, size, and length are all determined by a Hydrobender's control. Due to water being incompressible, a whip can be sharpened into a blade that can even slice through metal with relative ease.
- Water Jets
High pressure jets can be used to force opponents back or even blast clean through a target if focused enough. Water jets are primarily used if the user has intent of severely hurting their opponents.
- Water Walls/Water Shields
Water can be molded into any shape and can be used to deflect an attack, trap opponents in a viscous body, reshaped and propelled at attackers before they can recover, or solidified into a shield of ice. This diversity and ability to swiftly change to suit the situation is what makes the hydrobender's defense so adaptable.
- Water Thermokinesis
Hydrobenders also possess thermokinetic abilities regarding their element, meaning that they can alter the physical state of the water they manipulate (between liquid, solid and gas) at will. Changing the phase of water allows for multiple techniques in the course of a battle, from encasing an opponent in ice to hiding behind a wall of mist. Ice and steam/fog can also be molded in a diverse range of shapes. Ice provides a degree of hard lethality since it can be molded into spikes or blades to pin down or impale opponents. Steam or mist can obscure a battlefield and mask movement.
Intermediate Techs.
- Breath of Ice
A Hydrobender can use their breath to rapidly freeze objects, such as metallic chains, or an opponent. For a more advanced version of the technique, the user takes a deep breath and exhales the air as a cloud of freezing mist.
- Ice Spear
It involves freezing a stream of water and then sending the frozen result flying at the target.
- Ice Shield
A Hydrobender can freeze an amount of water in front of them, creating a shield of ice.
- Water Knife
The ability to shape water into a super-sharp edge or point for a split-second. Due to water's highly incompressible nature, it enables a Hydrobender to cut through metal, wood and stone. However Mashimizu is a novice at this technique and can't use it as much
Secondary Usage: On her off time, Mashimizu uses her talent for her element to train via making ice and snow sculptures and to re-enact the winter scene in which she grew up in so she can always have it twenty-four seven.
[b]Avatar[/b], [i]katara[/i]
I, Water PRINCESS, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 9, 2010 13:37:34 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. Your powers are far too powerful and don't provide any weaknesses for people to overcome them. For instance, how would she be able to summon the cold and ice when it happens to be in the middle of spring or summer? Or for those particularly sunny days?
o2. Secondary usage needs to be if not something related to a power instead of simple things, you can include making ice sculptors I suppose but wouldn't you rather describe perhaps another technique she can use with water?
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Post by Mashiro Koyuki on Feb 10, 2010 18:52:25 GMT -5
Done and edited.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 11, 2010 22:42:59 GMT -5
I will say this again;
o1. Your powers are far too powerful and don't provide any weaknesses for people to overcome them.
- You have far too many abilities and you still don't provide any real weaknesses or limitations for her, instead - you just added more and more abilities. There are no such things as normal and intermediate techs for a character; only combination and secondary usage.
- Your emotions and personality traits are contradictory. How can she be self centered and empathic at the same time? Unapproachable but be a motherly, nagging figure at once?
- Poisons; overly confident, arrogant, ignorant? They all link together and don't need to be stated in a series of three spaces, please think of something more basic and somehow leading away from certain personality traits. Why not try certain foods or animals?
- The same goes for your pleasures; winter, snow, water~? Please state actual and basic things she can like besides anything to do with frozen liquid. Also; sweets and lollipops are the same thing, since it is a type of candy and sweet treat.
- I'm not quite following with your secrets when you state, Does the Cat's Cradle. How is playing with string a secret? &having a pet cat isn't necessarily a secret and somehow difficult to see how it would even be something to hide from other people. The same for calligraphy - what is so secretive or taboo about that?
- Also, your icons that you are using for this application - you are going to use Katara from Airbender but the one you have on currently is still Rukia from Bleach. Be sure to change that as to not create any confusion.~
- Inventory; there are no such things as hydrobender scrolls. This is not Avatar The Last Airbender.
I understand that you are trying to make a character resembling the characteristics of Katara (necklace from relative, bender scrolls, motherly nagging . . .) but it's advised that you create a character from your OWN image. Not mimic characteristics from something you see on television. Take your time and do this thoroughly as you only have one more chance to edit this again.~
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