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Post by JEREMIAH LAVIGNE on Feb 21, 2010 12:58:16 GMT -5
THE SABERTOOTH - - - JEREMIAH curtis LAVIGNE "I HAVE A HERO LIVING IN ME."
&. ALIAS: Sabertooth
&. AGE: twenty two years old
&. GENDER: male
&. SEXUALITY: Heterosexual
&. STATUS: Single, Looking
☆ Joker ☆ Charming ☆ Smart ☆ Charismatic ☆ Decisive
★ Over Protective ★ Incautious ★ Reckless ★ Aggressive ★ Never Serious
✓ Transformation ✓ Fighting ✓ Clubs ✓ Joking ✓ Summer ✓ Sun, Light
✕ Winter ✕ Moon, Dark ✕ Serious People ✕ People who aren’t proud of their abilities ✕ Critics
♡ He left his family to their death ♡ He has a fear for death ♡ He dislikes people asking about his past
» Three Rings with Peridot’s on them
- Species: Cat, Smilodon
- Strong Traits: agility, endurance, charisma. (pick 3)
- Weak Traits: Strength, adaptability, tactic. (pick 3)
Aura: Paranoia – His aura let’s him put paranoia into any of his foes who look at him, the paranoia will mainly be for sharp objects and although it might not be useful for his allies, it’s useful for him due to being a Saber Tooth and . His allies on the other hand will lose any sort of paranoia they have while within a distance of ten meters. Thus say someone is paranoid when it comes to flying then they’ll lose there paranoia but will gain it back once there off of the aura area(ten meter radius).
Beast Form: Jeremiah’s beast form is that of Cat, Smilodon or in other words a Saber Tooth. The tiger has rather very sharp teeth the size of ten inches meaning practically a foot. His nails are rather sharp at the length of four inches. His fur is of the brown orange type of color with black stripes on it. He has eyes characterized by the color black. The one thing that might give away the fact that he is a Changeling is due to his unusually sharp canines. Saber Tooth
[b]tales of the abyss[/b], [i]Luke fon Fabre[/i] I, JOHNNY, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 21, 2010 13:14:23 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. Please fill out the insert lyrics here or a quote area, not that it's completely necessary but it's nice to complete the application ne~?
o2. the paranoia will mainly be for sharp things but other stuffs to just that it might not be as intense as pointy stuffs, and although it might not be useful for his allies, it’s useful for him when he has Sabre Tooth.
That whole paragraph isn't quite reaching to my understanding; paranoia will be mainly used for sharp things and other stuffs? I have no idea what you're trying to explain when you say that. Or when you state, that it might not be as intense as pointy stuffs.
o3. Also, it is Saber; not Sabre Tooth & very sharp teeth; not tooth. Also when you state the beast forms eyes are a simple black; thus nothing ordinary. Are you trying to say that they appear ordinary or they are nothing ordinary which means that they aren't normal?
You need to be more descriptive and a little professional with this application, it really speaks about your character and how your roleplaying skills are so please take that into consideration when you're naming off your abilities and English skills.~
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Post by JEREMIAH LAVIGNE on Feb 21, 2010 13:27:00 GMT -5
Edited accordingly. I hadn't seen the lyrics or quote area. Sorry about those "stuffs" I took off most of them. As for the "sabre" I originally though it was written "saber" but the word kept on correcting me so I supposed I was mistaken. Anyways it's all edited.
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Post by ÐISNEҰ on Feb 21, 2010 13:35:15 GMT -5
R E V I S E;
o1. Perhaps I didn't explain myself correctly but THINGS and STUFFS are under the same category of not explaining what you are trying to say. What are these "things" and "stuffs" you are talking about? Description, description, description~!
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Post by JEREMIAH LAVIGNE on Feb 21, 2010 13:59:44 GMT -5
Updated >_<
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Post by ɓįƴǫrį on Feb 26, 2010 17:58:51 GMT -5
R E V I S E ;;
Saber Tooth Tiger. You can't have one as it's an extinct species.
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