Chishio Keikyoku

[me]

BAMF

Chishio Keikyoku

Let's have some fun, this beat is sick
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick

&. ALIAS: None

&. AGE: Twenty-Two

&. GENDER: Male

&. SEXUALITY: Homosexual

&. STATUS: Single, Drunken nights only




☆ Once a superior gives Keikyoku a task, they can be confident he will carry it out exactly as planned. He is relentless in his tactics and will even sacrifice his own comrades to satisfy the request of 'The Father' it is this attitude that means he is considered Reliable.
☆ Chishio is adept at using the tool of the tongue to bend others to his will literally and metaphorically. He is able to weave himself out of almost any social situation, this trait is sometimes described as Silk Tongued.
☆ It takes allot to deter Keikyoku from his goals, he has no concept of mercy but only obeying commands it is this demeanor that highlights him as Determined.
☆ As flaunted by his reliability and cunning nature it can be safely assumed that Keikyoku is fairly Intelligent.
☆The Magi's duties remain only to that of the 'Father' although he values his life over anybody else's it has been shown that he is Loyal to his cause.




★ Chishio's personality is cracked to say the least seeing as he constantly makes hurtful remarks about his peers, he is in short highly Embittered
★ Keikyoku couldn't care less about secrets or privacy, he is prone to exaggerating or just plain making up lies about others this causes those who know him from social situations regard him as Bitchy and generally keep away from him.
★ Chishio is prone to using his powers aggressively, as little things give him more pleasure than scratching up a hideous these outbursts mean he is often feared as overly Violent.
★ Keikyoku cares for no one but himself and although he is dedicated to the views and ideals of 'The Father' he will throw it all away if he feels it is putting his life in to much danger. He is willing to manipulate and break people's spirit to his gain, this is a testament to how Selfish he really is.
★ Chishio often feels overly grandiose, with an exaggerated sense of self importance. He also feels unique, and believes that he can only be understood with others of equal brilliance or importance. These are just two of the many traits that show that Chishio is an Outspoken Narcissist.







✓ Power
✓ Winning
✓ Success
✓ Praise
✓ Taunting




✕ Criticism
✕ Being overshadowed
✕ Naivety
✕ Dirt
✕ Odor




♡ Is scared of wrinkles
♡ Cares about how others see him
♡ Paranoid




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• Power Trigger: Jealousy
  
• Magical Affinity:Average
  

Abilities: Blood manipulation is Keikyoku's advanced form of Hydromancy with this ability he can control the human and animal blood like a Hydromancer manipulates water, although he can use this ability at will, however at times when he feels intense envy toward another he will accidentally cause the blood to increase in temperature and pressure causing their skin to rapture and burn with intense bleeding of the person of whom has caused this jealousy. Without the fuel of jealousy, Keikyoku must make physical contact with the target in order to manipulate their blood.

Primary Usage: Anaconda Dance To use this 'Spell' Keikyoku makes contact with his victim, the simple touch causing their blood to flow slowly making their movements slow and sluggish he then wraps all of his body around the target going from a hugging position into a '69' position he then uses his power to close the blood vessels in such a way it resembles a snake constricting his prey hence the name Anaconda dance, the pressure of constriction causes a rise in the pressure in the prey's body cavity greater than the heart can counter, resulting in slow cardiac arrest. If anaconda dance fails he will resort to using a much weakened form of his trigger ability which still needs physical contact to work.




[b]bleach[/b], [i]luppi[/i]
I, ME, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.

[Camby]

Me-

'Sucky Fucky Two Dollar' is a terrible way to make first impressions on the moderators who will be grading your profile.

Is English your first language? If it is, you've rushed this application. I'd suggest taking this to Microsoft Word and placing the proper punctuation, capitalization, and reworking your sentence structure so that your application reads enough to make sense. You have also misspelled a lot of things, like malignant and five, so you need to stop, go back, reread your application, and fix it. There is referring to a place or position. They're is for 'they are'. Their is a possessive adjective. Some words you just straight up quit typing, like 'aroun' or 'The eight most i'. If you're going to notify us to grade this, you should have your application complete. Your application reflects your skill as a writer, and this, as is, is telling me that you don't care.

Do these revisions, and when you're done, link again in the Notification thread.

-Camby

[me]

Edited and sorry about the whole sucky fucky thing i was watching this

CHO

[Camby]

Me-

I'm reading through this application again, and it's still riddled with technical errors. You haven't added periods where appropriate. Thoughts which aren't even related are strung together in long, mindless streams of sentences with no ends.

Take my advice. Put this application into Word, read it through, and make it right.

-Camby

[me]

Ok i wewrote goods and bads section then i put it into Word and then an online uk grammar checker thing. Hopefully better now.

[Camby]

Me-

Here, let me assist you.

Blood manipulation is Keikyoku's advanced form of Hydromancy with this ability he can control the human and animal blood like a Hydromancer manipulates water, although he can use this ability at will, however at times when he feels intense envy toward another he will accidentally cause the blood to increase in temperature and pressure causing their skin to rapture and burn with intense bleeding of the person of whom has caused this jealousy. Without the fuel of jealousy, Keikyoku must make physical contact with the target in order to manipulate their blood.

This /should/ be:

"Blood manipulation is Keikyoku's advanced form of Hydromancy. With this ability, he can control an animal's blood like a Hydromancer manipulates water. He can use this ability at will, however, at times when he feels intense envy toward another, he will accidentally cause the offender's blood to increase in temperature and pressure, causing their skin to rupture and burn with intense bleeding. Without the fuel of jealousy, Keikyoku must make physical contact with the target in order to manipulate their blood."

Also, Artificial Magi cannot access their powers without their trigger.

I don't think you're a bad person, and I can tell that you've put a lot of effort into making this application better. I really appreciate it. However:

We do not feel you meet the standard of role player we are looking to hold here in BGM. There are many things, severe spelling and grammar errors being the most of them, that leave me to say that I must suggest you seek a site that is less in-depth as far as a necessity for writing prowess goes.

There are many wonderful and slightly less advanced fantasy RPGs that would likely adore having you and your characters as a part of their cast, and I wish you the best of luck in visiting the RPG-Directory and seeking them out.

Thank you for your interest in BGM.

-Camby