Somnus Caelum

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Demon King

- - - SOMNUS xeno CAELUM
"insert favorite quote/lyric here."

&. ALIAS: demon king; creator of illusions.

&. AGE: one thousand, seven hundred and sixty-three.

&. GENDER: male.

&. SEXUALITY: heterosexual.

&. STATUS: single.




☆ honest.
☆ loyal.
☆ trust-worthy.
☆ wise.
☆ patient.
☆ poetic.
☆ intellectual.




★ mean.
★ pride.
★ strict.
★ rough.
★ lustful.
★ sadistic.
★ daring.




✓ sweets.
✓ sakura.
✓ women - his servants/pets.
✓ strategic games.
✓ reading.
✓ killing.
✓ philosophy.




✕ men.
✕ children.
✕ childish games.
✕ sour flavored things; such as candy and food.
✕ ugly people.
✕ beggars.
✕ liars.




♡ easily attracted to strong women.
♡ wishes to live a peaceful life.
♡ poet.




» Sword - Katana; Kagaseo
» Book; Secrets of You
» Ring; Silver Soul

• Title: The Sorcerer of Illusions.
  
• Magical Attribute: Long-Lasting.
  

Magical Domain:
Mirror - Mirror is an illusionary world that belongs to Somnus and is under his complete and utter control. This domain seems to be based on the philosophy of seeing things in mirrors that you can never reach, because they are illusions, but, at the same time, the thing that you see is real. In this realm, Somnus is able to cast his autohypnosis on anyone or thing, tapping into their mind to find their fears or secrets, and use it to torture them mentally. Somnus uses this world to travel through memories, he can recall good or bad memories, making his realm about to bring out good things about a person and use it to encourage them. The domain is mainly used to show people what they are, what they fear, who they aren't, and who they can become, Somnus can use this to his advantage against someone who is weak spirited to crush them completely, or break down someone who is strong spirited. In this world, just like a mirror, it can create things or shatter them, giving Somnus the self-proclaimed title "God of Destruction & Creation".

Ultimate Weapon:
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Ultimate Spell:
Lunar Reverse - Lunar Reverse is a technique that is usually performed while using the Kagaseo, but, it can also be done without it. The technique goes into affect by the user casting his powers upon himself, and, if his opponent see's this, they will be captured into the illusion, and everything to them is reverse; up is down, back is forward, left is right, ect. So, if the user were to attack from the front, he would really attack them from behind, though, Somnus makes it harder to understand where he is attacking from by creating illusionary clones of himself, attacking in the opposite direction of him. And, you can only tell if it's an illusion by attacking one, but, they all attack at the same time, so it would require a timing strategy or something to find out the clone from real. The Lunar Reverse requires almost all of Somnus' energy, and performing the technique puts a huge strain on his brain, putting him in a useless state for a few days or more.

CONS: The illusions that Somnus cast upon his targets can't last forever, but, it can for quite awhile, making it seem even longer to those who may be caught within the illusion. The user can only capture the targets in an illusion by making eye contact with them, meaning if they were avoiding the eye contact, his visual illusions won't be able to work upon his targets. Though, after each illusion is casted, Somnus has to wait a bit before performing another right away, if he does so, it will begin to put a strain on him and weaken his future illusions casted upon the targets. Also, after just performing a large amount of illusions, like, 7 per battle or whatever, could cause a strain on him and weaken his illusions as well. If his strains get too bad, his body will enter in a stunned state where he is unable to move for awhile, leaving him open for direct attacks.



[b]sengoku strays[/b], [i]oda nobunaga[/i]
I, GEN, hereby agree to have read and abide the rule set forth by the staff. By signing this, I completely understand the reason behind GM's rating and will also to take any and all liability for my actions.

[ÐISNEҰ]

R E V I S E;

o1. His poisons when it states sours; sours...what? Sour candy? Just plain sour flavor? A tad little more detail darling.~

o2. Interesting powers but it is way too powerful - we recommend at least two weaknesses to your abilities and power. Not to mention outside of the Eternal realm, you are going to have to have the person acknowledge your powers in order for them to work. Just hoping you will remember that small fact as well.~

[ÐISNEҰ]

I'm sorry but it must be revised once more; every eternal has that same disadvantage of being "seen through" because if they are in another area besides the endless realm - then they have to convince their victims that their magic is true. So stating this con for BOTH abilities seem redundant.

You need to give him a limitation of how powerful these illusions can be and how long they can last. Something that is basic and will give others the upper hand to defy besides trying to see through your tricks.

Useless? No. As I stated, every eternal has this disadvantage, but just because you are stating these weaknesses on the application doesn't mean that your character is actually telling another person what they could do to defeat you.

[ÐISNEҰ]

For one, you really need to stop rushing this application - especially more so if you are expecting to become an Eternal. These classes were marked with the green star for a reason, meaning that they are not as simple as the other races are. They need time and dedication, not something written off in the next ten minutes. This isn't a race; please try to understand this.~

- The mental damage, it really should be inflicted upon him rather than the victim since he could easily confuse himself. Or perhaps trying to keep up his illusions after an amount of time would place an ever heavier strain on himself.~

[ÐISNEҰ]

D E N I E D;

o1. First, the word pride placed in the Dark section; one, saying just the word pride doesn't really explain. Are you trying to say he has too much pride? Too little? And second, pride wouldn't exactly be something that is frowned upon darling.

o2. Eternal's must have a weapon or an item that allows them to execute these abilities, something in particular that aids them.

o3. Also, after just performing a large amount of illusions, like, 7 per battle or whatever, could cause a strain on him and weaken his illusions as well. Like, 7 per battle or whatever? No no. We need description and less laziness of english vocabulary when it comes to applications and seven is more than necessary, the numbers would at least have to be around four or five at best. His magic amounts would be best described as copious amounts instead of long lasting.

o4. You've posted at least eleven times on this account and you haven't even been accepted yet, like the rules state - you may post when you are accepted but if you're not (besides the activity thread, you are pardoned on that ONE post) then you aren't allowed.

I'm sorry but this application must be denied, I've told you to revise more than three times and that is the limit for each application.