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Post by faina on Jan 31, 2010 2:16:17 GMT -5
Sweetest songbird, what doth you sing? - - - FAINA kacia VANDANA "Two little girls dancing in a row one spins fast and the other one slow one with blue eyes the other girl green white satin dresses with time inbetween."
&. ALIAS: Faina, Faine, Fai, Fey
&. AGE: seventeen
&. GENDER: female
&. SEXUALITY: heterosexual
&. STATUS: single
☆ mature ☆ intelligent ☆ bookworm ☆ creative ☆ dignified ☆ graceful ☆ conservative
★ silent ★ sensitive ★ overly emotional ★ serious ★ hides emotions ★ paranoid ★ lonely
✓ art ✓ reading ✓ arithmetic ✓ fine wines ✓ calligraphy ✓ opera
✕ sloppy handwriting ✕ beer ✕ sports ✕ fighting ✕ dogs
♡ Virtuoso;;; She doesn't want anyone to find this out for fear of being stalked for her voice. She'd rather be seen as the prim and proper self rather than liked for her voice. ♡ Insomniac;; She hides this behind her constant studying. She rarely sleeps, as she is afraid to do so, especially by herself. ♡ Constantly Afraid/Superstitious;; She is afraid of being left alone more than anything else, as well as many other things. Darkness makes her feel lost, and she puts a lot more meaning behind the small things than there really is to it.
» A red ribbon around her neck, given to her by her master. » An empty locket.
- Master: --wip! coming soon!--
- Physical Prowess: lesser (1)
- Magical Affinity: average (3)
- Vampiric Insanity: average (2)
Abilities: Faina is a very intelligent girl, putting all of her time into intellectual pursuits rather than physical ones or for power. She would prefer spending her day in the library, collecting knowledge and creating new poems to going out and doing physical training. She's a virtuoso, and spends a lot of her time hiding from the limelight that often seems to find her.
Primary Usage: Siren's Song;; Her voice is hauntingly beautiful, and very difficult to forget. It can drive a person to obsession should they listen for too long or are too close as she sings.
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ɓįƴǫrį
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Post by ɓįƴǫrį on Jan 31, 2010 3:25:24 GMT -5
R E V I S E ;;
All righty... this'll be simple and quick. Change your screen-name to reflect character's name. When you've got that, I want those powers fleshed out a bit more. What's she a virtuoso of? How does that status tie in with her knowledge based powers? Details, details. Once that's done, thresh out that song. She's not a real siren, she can't manage that. Your little vampire is just a ghoul, so she can't possibly be that bewitching. Hypnotic suggestion doesn't work that far.
On the side... how does it work if she's overly emotional and hides her emotions at the same time? Are you trying to give her split-personality disorder? You explained how she's constantly afraid, but what about that superstition? Thresh it out, and then get back to me.
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